Progress on the project (Bleak the fangame)

I have finished all the mechanics of the game, all I need to do is finish the story (currently we are at 30%, yes already because the gameplay loop takes up a major part of the game). here is an overview of the first level, I am waiting for your feedback, still quite a few things to improve like the translation which is buggy (it translates the messages on paper but not the rest).